Yet another Comic...

Over the week, I've done some comic work. If you remember the other one I had a bash at, I dropped it. Luckily, this was a good thing, as Artekus left and my comic would have been for squat. I didn't get far enough in so I was able to make a few alterations.
On the note of my art style, without the proper tools, I'm afraid I'll have to go without colour. Also, this is a pretty cartoony comic, pretty much akin to something out of loony tunes, don't expect any Watchmen or the Spirit type artwork. This all pretty much adds up to low-grade work, but I get some fun out of it and hopefully, you'll get a bit of Skursir which makes a difference from the stories in the Storytelling section.

Well, there's obviously no intrest, not even some harsh language - can't bode good news at all. In any case, I've taken another shot at a couple more pages to see if I can finally spark some attention to this thread. I'll see to adding the fourth page if I get at least some constructive comments and critisism.

Oops didnt I comment the first time?
I'm sure I talked to you about this maybe it was on chat who knows! anyway your a better person at drawing then me and more consistant, which is the hardest part once you can draw consistantly you can only improve, if you draw sporadically and incositant (like I used to when I was inclined ) you never get better (like me!).
As for constructive critisim umm I'd probably say dont try to emmulate other peoples style especially in comics, develop your own style of drawing and get comfortable in it, also I suppose practise feet I had so much trouble with them, they are such a pain to draw perspective wise

This must be set some time ago if skur is still loayl to the Republic!