Lunarwolf Chief Operative
Number of posts : 6401 Age : 44 Location : Southampton, UK Registration date : 2009-02-23
| Subject: The Swollen Shaak Cantina...now on SWTOR RP WIKI! Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:14 am | |
| Yep, thats right... with a little encouragement from our illustrious leader and some other memebers (well, in truth they didnt say 'no' quick enough), I have gone through the 6 pages of posts that make up The Swollen Shaak Cantina open RP and have attempted to collate it into a short story. Although I have had to move some people's posts about a little and there have been some slight additions and also cropping for sake of consistency and continuity, I've tried to keep as much of everyone's original text in place as possible (prob why it took me fookin' ages). That said, by the time I had finished my brain hurt...a lot. So, I employed the ever vigilant eye of Black Heart (well, and the rest of his being else it would have just been squishy) too go over it, edit it, tidy it, and in all other purposes; fix it. You can thank him for the finished product as it makes more sense now! So, without further ado or rambling, I give to you: The Swollen Shaak Cantina - SWTOR RP Wiki (We're all famous now! booyah!) | |
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Sureshot Chief Operative
Number of posts : 5209 Age : 47 Location : Reading, England Registration date : 2009-02-11
| Subject: Re: The Swollen Shaak Cantina...now on SWTOR RP WIKI! Thu Apr 02, 2009 10:50 am | |
| Thats great thanks mate! I noticed a couple of things that needed to be changed, both about species. The Quarran was called a Quara so I changed, and someone mentioned something about an Ewok in a beauty pageant! Ewoks haven't been discovered yet I don't think. Still, I can't find the line where it is anymore. Friggin' awesome job though mate, it reads really well. | |
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Black Heart Registered
Number of posts : 334 Age : 37 Location : The dreaded U.S. Registration date : 2009-03-03
| Subject: Re: The Swollen Shaak Cantina...now on SWTOR RP WIKI! Thu Apr 02, 2009 12:42 pm | |
| Yeah, I noticed the thing about the Quara too. Left it in there because I looked up Quara on Wookieepedia and it turns out to be another name for Aqualish. Wouldn't worry though, doesn't matter much. And I let stuff like the Ewok thing go because I didn't want to change people's writing much. Should be fixed though if anyone comes across it. | |
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| Subject: Re: The Swollen Shaak Cantina...now on SWTOR RP WIKI! Thu Apr 02, 2009 3:01 pm | |
| Wooo! Great job on editing and sticking it all into something resembling a story there guys!
Just read it. Its fun and full of crazy hehe.
Seriously.. damn its fun to read it again. This guild is full of crazies! Meh likes! |
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Raiflaine Registered
Number of posts : 104 Age : 39 Location : Bedford; England Registration date : 2009-02-13
| Subject: Re: The Swollen Shaak Cantina...now on SWTOR RP WIKI! Thu Apr 02, 2009 10:50 pm | |
| must say that was done really well! well worth the read again! | |
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Lunarwolf Chief Operative
Number of posts : 6401 Age : 44 Location : Southampton, UK Registration date : 2009-02-23
| Subject: Re: The Swollen Shaak Cantina...now on SWTOR RP WIKI! Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:12 am | |
| *holds up his hand* I believe it was myself (as Ree'tak) that made the Ewok comment. From our respectful 'Gamorrean in a bikini image' (no i wont post it again ) I'll alter it. Has to be said though, the thing would have been a shambles without BH giving it the once-over! EDIT: Our Ewok has now morphed into a Gamorrean | |
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