The adventures of Renia Vais

Prologue: Renia was born on the moon of Nar Shaddaa to Rex and Amiril Vais, and they lived in the refugee sector. When Renia was ten years old her parents were killed by crimelords when they refused to repay their debt; this left Renia to fend for herself, living on the streets. This drove her to a life of crime which eventually brought her into the hands of Owolf a retired Bounty Hunter when she was fifteen. Owolf taught her how to be deadly with two pistols and also without weapons, five years later Owolf was killed when his apartment was destroyed by a bomb. With nothing left for her on the washed down planet so she 'borrowed' a ship and began to travel the galaxy as a bounty hunter.


CHAPTER 1:
A black two man starfighter flew down to the atmosphere of Cosruscant- home of the galactic senate. The upper-city was full of clouds and there was barely anything to see apart from the landing pad the fighter was landing on. As the blacked out cockpit door opened a a woman dressed in black climbed out onto the platform, her hair reached down to the top of her neck and she wore black shades covering her eyes. She walked over to the end of the pad were a speeder bike; modified to be able to fly high in the sky. She climbed on and flicked a switch before it zoomed away.

Descending from the clouds the bike parked outside of a club in the entertainment district. The doors to the building swung open and she entered the building that was full of many different species from Twi'lek to Trandoshan almost all of them about to do something illegal. She came up to the bar and said "I'm looking for Dlanor Kralc, know were i can find him."
"Who wants to know!" The Weequay bartender replied with attitude.
She pulled out her pistol and held it up to his gut "The name is Renia Vais and you'd come if you know what's best for you."
"You don't scare me." The Weequay ducked under the counter and pulled out a heavy carbine and began to shoot in her direction. Renia dodged around the incoming laser bolts and pulled out her other pistol and began to fire back and followed Dlanor as he tried to escape her. The firing ended up in the streets, Renia continued to dodge yet so did Dlanor. Dlanor ran and climbed into a speeder but Renia took the rifle off her back and shot the turbine of the speeder causing it to crash into the side of the club.
"Now, you're coming with me!" She told Dlanor as he lay half unconscious in the crashed vehicle. She dragged the body and out it into another speed she had placed near by and flew to an apartment building.
"Here's the one you want." She told the masked man as she handed over her captive.
"Well done."
"Now, were's my creds." She extended her hand as she was given 50,000 credits.
"There's your payment... now leave!" He shouted.
Renia walked out of the room back to her speeder and set off to the lower levels of Coruscant for her next bounty.

To be Continued...



Chapter 2

Arriving in the Coruscant Underworld, Renia walked down the dark, dull alley when she reached a small worn down building. The door was magnetically sealed and the only way of opening it on the outside was by a pass code. Using a long piece of rope attached to her belt with a small grapple on the end, she climbed up the side of the building a disabled the two nearby cameras. Once on the roof Renia cut a hole and jumped down into the building, but it was heavily guarded inside and she was shot at by a group of patrol guards; she rolled to the container next to her and took cover as she pulled out her two pistols and began to shoot back; hitting three in the chest and one in the head, clearing the corridor she ran to the control room were she tried to turn off the power. "Dam thing is sealed in place." Lifting up her pistol she destroyed the console making all the power in the building shut off. "Know to find who i'm looking for." She mumbled to herself.
Minutes later after disposing of the rest of the guards near her she found a passage way that led to a small compact hallway which took her to a secret bunker were her target Masaki Toni was hiding. Stepping out into the room Renia told "It seems you have quite a price on your head!"
"Wh..who are you." He replied nervously.
"That's not important... what is, important is that you ARE coming with me."
"Ah HA HA HA!... nice try bounty hunter but you over estimate yourself. Guards get her!" He order his protectors. Blaster bolts towards her as she ducked and fired back while taking cover, with four left to go Renia jumped on top of the crate she was behind and flipped over her attacks as she initiated her flame-thrower attached to her arm and they began to scream in pain while she went after Masaki. Taking a sudden stop as she noticed that a load of mines had been placed.
"Hmm.. harder than i thought it would be." She thought to herself although it wouldn't stop her as she took careful steps past them and continued her chase. Renia soon reached the outside surface of coruscant again and her mark was lost.

To be continued...

Chapter 3:

Losing her target wasn't the best thing she could have done, especially since the bounty was placed by Junra the Hutt a ruthless crime mistress placed on Coruscant, Renia returned to her. "I'm afraid he.. got away." The droid nearby translated to the hutt and Junra replied. "Choy, Murishani... Keel-ee calleya ku kah."
"Well if you told me more about the mark you wanted me to kill the maybe we wouldn't be having this talk."
"Schutta, Bona nai kachu." She moaned angrily as the guards around began to close in on Renia as she prepared herself for what may be about to happen. "Kako Kreespa!" Junra commanded. Blaster bolts shot in to the middle of the newly formed circle, were Renia was standing, in a quick move she flipped up onto the metal beams and many of Junra's Guards were killed by their own comrades. She ran across the beam and shot the power supply making all the lighting and electronics shut down, while blaster were fired everywhere, hitting almost everyone Renia creped behind Junra and put a blaster to her head whilst ordering them to stand down.
"Kee hasa do blastoh!. Junra told her so called protecters who had just shot eachother.
"Now i'm leaving and if i catch anyone following i'll activate the detonater i've hidden!"
"Soong peetch alay." Junra said to Renia as she was hit from behind from a rival bounty hunter.

Nice story I look forward to the next part!

By the way if you want this post deleted so you can continue just ask and it shall be done.

Chapter 4:

Waking up hours later Renia found her self locked up in a rusty dark dungeon. "erhu." She mumbled as her head was forcefully lifted up towards a Tradoshan.
"Dopo mee gusha, peedunkey?." Understanding the basics of Huttese, Renia knew what the Trandoshan wanted.
"Well if you let me out of these shackles."
Her arms and feet were released and crowds began shouting, placing bets. The Trandoshan stood firm and towered over her, her shot his leg towards her and she jumped up dodging the kick and kicking him in the face, knocking him down.
"Come on! I know you have better than that." She taunted her opponent as she threw a flurry of punches, although she was hit back too, he head butted her and then threw her into the wall, almost rendering her unconscious, yet luck was on her side when she found a blast nearby, she crawled towards it and he came closer; as he crabbed her by the legs she got the blaster and just before he swung her around she made a deadly shot to the head, killing him almost instantly. Blasting open the lock she made her escape and killed all those who tried to stop her, including Junra, eventually making it back into the outside world.

Thanks for sharing some of Renia's action-packed exploits Vais. Can't wait to read more! She's a dangerous one isn't she? Always great to see guildies getting stuck into some storytelling - nice job!

Redwatch wrote:

Thanks for sharing some of Renia's action-packed exploits Vais. Can't wait to read more! She's a dangerous one isn't she? Always great to see guildies getting stuck into some storytelling - nice job!

Thanks

Always great to see some members stories on here, especially so soon, interested to see what else you've got coming up

Yup sure is. This also gets massive plus points from me into full membership!!! Keep up the good work buddy.

Chapter 5:

Upon Coruscant's surface Renia was met by republic troopers who had been after the hutt for months, and one of their spies had been in their undercover.
"In the name of the Republic, you are under arrest." Shouted Captain Rin
"Under what charges?" Replied Renia
"Murder of an officer."
"...Wh?"
"Be quiet scum.. you are coming with us!"
"You can try." She told them as she pulled out her weapons and began to shoot at the republic troopers, pulling off a grenade from her belt, she through it towards them; as it exploded she made her escape. Running down the rotten streets she was ambushed by another squad of troopers.
"Freeze! or well shoot." Commanded a trooped, but Renia continued to run leading the troopers to open fire, she dodges most of them but was hit in the arm by one of the bolts; Renia gave a small cry and dropped one of her pistols, but still ran.
Coming from behind were two speeders, gaining speed they were soon right behind her, deciding she couldn't out run them she jumped on the back of one of the speeders and shot the driver while taking control over the speeder. The driver in the other speeder began to shoot at her, yet the shots missed as she increased the speed of her vehicle and zoomed away from the other, although it soon caught back up to her and began to shoot towards her, yet Renia's marksmanship skills were unmatched as she fired several bolts towards the speeders engine causing it to crash but more troopers were on there way.
Entering the Residential district Renia was hit by some sort of heavy artillery that destroyed the back of the speeder and sent her plummeting into a residential suite; crashing through the window Renia back flipped out of the vehicle onto the apartment floor, as the family of the apartment look to Renia, their faces filled with fear she ran to the turbo lift and made her way to the garage before anyone else could fire at her... but when she got their she was met by ten troopers and no were to find cover, as they came closer to arrest her she pressed a button on her wristband that activated her flame-thrower burning all of them in minutes as the screamed in pain and dies, Renia grabbed one of the nearby speeders and flew off, back to her base of operations.

Chapter 6

Arriving in the works Renia landed next to a Magnetically sealed door, after entering the pass code and fingerprint recognition, she drove through and parked in a rusted garage. Walking into a control room she was met by an assassin droid.
"A Bounty has been placed on you, mistress." The droid informed Renia.
"By who?" she asked as she bandaged her arm.
"One Qwee the Hutt, cousin of Junra."
"What's the price?"
"60,000 credits dead or alive... and it appears there is something closing in on the building."
The walls began to shake and crumbles as a detonator beeped the metal wall exploded.
"Activate self destruct..NOW!" Shouted Renia and a count down began as a bounty hunter entered, shooting at Renia, of course she shot back as she ran to her ship.
"5..."
Renia got into her ship named the Enigma and preseed a button opening the hanger doors.
"4..."
The ship lifted of the ground and flew out of the building.
"3.....2......1.....0" The supposed secret building blew up in in a puff of fire and smoke.

Almost out of the atmosphere Renia was hit by a following ship, with her hyperdrive damaged she swerved back down to the planet and activated her rear canons and shields, as more blasts hit her ship, her engine was destroyed plummeting down into the streets Renia jumped out of her ship, falling to the ground below, she caught onto a speeder flying by; throwing the driver out she got in herself, but the unknown ship continued to pursue her, and shoot, damaging the surroundings in the process. Landing in the street she ran into a populated area, eventually going into a building nearby, known as the Hyperion.

((thought i'd finally add to this again))

Chapter 7

Renia left the club, making her way into the streets, she moved swiftly; turning her head looking to see if she wass being followed. Nobody suspitious behind her, above her or infront of her. She continued to walk, walking, never stopping until something caught her eye turning her head to a poster stuck to the wall, she noticed it was her:

'Wanted...Alive!'
"What the? The double crossing, two faced scum... I'm gunna kill 'im"
She stormed off, over to a speeder, grabbing the elderly Rodian driver; Pulling out her pistol. "GET OUT! or i blow your brains out." As the Rodian struggled out of the speeder she grabbed him pulling him out, as he fell to the floor she climbed in and flew.
Arriving at the nearest starport were she then 'Persuaded' a pilot to give him her ship. Making her way off Coruscant she punched in the hyperspace co-ordinates.
"This is A.I piloting, hoe may i help you?"
"...Shut..UP!"
"Does not compute... i see you plan on going to the planet 'Hutta', my programing orders you to stop and continue on your Republic mission."
"Just shut up, and do it!"
"O.K... Hyperspace to hutta in 5... 4... 3... 2.. 1....."
The ship turned into position as it flew into hyperspace.

After an hour or two, the ship found it's destination and proceded to land onto the planet.
"Arriving at destination: Ord Mantell.."
"Ord Man...I SAID HUTTA!"
"I'm affraid i'm programed to make sure you contiune your republic aid mission... we will be landing in the repubic base in afew moments."
"Republic...base..."
The ship descended into the republic forces hanger.

Oi Renia dont you know we have Guild roles regarding behaviour to citizans eh? You can't be stealing things from the elderly
Nice to see some story telling!