A show of support, if you have the time....

.....and the inclination!

Quite a few years ago I started writing a fantasy novel entitled The Darkest Knight and although it all started coming together nicely I found myself suddenly writing less of the story and spending countless hours working out the world in which the story was meant to play out (that wasnt a bad thing, I really enjoy that kinda thing, its probably why I write pen and paper rp games). I've since fully realised that world and have started writing the story again.

The thing is, I could do with some feedback. Knowing how well you folk roleplay I suspect at least most of you read a fair bit and some of you even write (either for fun, a hobby or professionally), so I'm coming to you all asking if any of you could make the time to please read through what I have done so far and leave some comments.

It is a High Fantasy setting and may not be to everyone's taste, so please only read it if you like that kinda thing.

The Story:
So far I have uploaded 7 chapters to FictionPress.com (A prologue and 6 chapters), and it can be found by clicking HERE which brings up my profile page:

1. STORY LINK: clicking this will take you to the story. You can navigate the chapters by using the drop-down menu in the top-right of the screen once it loads or press the next page button (which looks like this: >> ) right next to the drop-down.
2. FORUM: This is a link to the Forum I have connected to do with it; if any of you could join this and leave comments / discuss I would be VERY grateful (and it would stop me feeling like a 'billy-no-mates'!) Alternatively you can also get to the forum HERE.
3. SUBSCRIBE: If you feel paticularly time-generous you can even subscribe to my page and get updated at least semi-regularly.



The Forum:
As previously asked, if any of you could also spare the time to sign up to my forum and pop in to chat every now and again your opinions would be grately appreciated.

InfoBase:
If you like what you read but want to know more about anything in the story, I have started an infobase using the Wikia interface which should make it easy to navigate. Its far from complete (it will take me SOME time) but if you want to delve into the back-story a little more you can find that HERE.


WARNING / DISCLAIMER:
This may not be important, but I dont want to accidently get Sure in trouble, so I want to say this here. This story has a Fiction Rate Certificate of M which means it is for mature audiences only. The story depicts scenes of a sexual nature and covers both violence and torture within its chapters. Keep it away from under 18s please!

Thanks very much in advance guys!
LW

Links Quick Summary:

STORY
FORUM
INFOBASE


ps: Before anyone happens to mention it, yes I appreciate this story's title has a striking similarity to a certain recent Christopher Nolan film that starred Mr. Bale and Mr. Ledger but frankly I concieved the idea back in 91' which according to my net sources is quite a bit before the screenplay for the film was devised so despite the fact my work isnt yet copyrighted I'm taking the moral high ground and not changing the name

Hmm....

"WARNING / DISCLAIMER:
This may not be important, but I dont want to accidently get Sure in trouble, so I want to say this here. This story has a Fiction Rate Certificate of M which means it is for mature audiences only. The story depicts scenes of a sexual nature and covers both violence and torture within its chapters. Keep it away from under 18s please!"

This art and the high fantasy setting spiked my interest... And knowing your rp style a bit i'm looking forward to wasting my time on this creation of yours

I have little time to waste these days thought... so i hope for your sake its good!

Joking^^ I'll give it a go! Or at least try

Thanks! There's a fair amount of it (the 7 chapters alone come to over 50,000 words :S)

Then there's the encyclopedia.....

in other words dont rush!

Sounds like it could be a great read! Over 18 only? Pshhh... Of course im 18

I'll check it out when I get a chance.

i will check the out in comming wekkend

i will check the out in comming wekkend

Thanks guys, appreciated

Ooooooooo new things! I'll give it a read next week mate.